Bluefeonix Productions- This website is a blog site with plenty of creativity! With animations, games, and more! -Many of them by the webmaster-! Here's MvS's Top 10 Tips:
Remember: first impressions are important: you seem to realize that with the stylish background you used! Try to bring that style throughout the entire site!
Try to use punctuation and capitalization: it makes it easier to read!
Maybe be more specific with your blog posts: it will give readers a reason to keep watching!
Might I recommend upgrading your animation tools? I myself use flash, but it is an expensive tool. Try using Koolmovies or other freeware.
Again, perhaps upgrade your game-making tools.
www.flixel.com has some tools for you!
Submit your material other places than your site, too! AlbinoBlackSheep and NewGrounds (and even DeviantART) are great flash-enthuisist sites!
Create some more content, enough said! XD
Don't give up: keep working on your games and movies!
Make your site a bit more interactive: I see you have a contest coming up...
Waffles.
Overall, this is a good site. I'll be keeping a close eye on it as time goes by! Best of luck with everything!
You get the: Creativity Award Awesome Entertainment!
Spimpsons Fan Site- This site is about the longest running animated series: The Simpsons! It is very immformative and is great for all fans. Here's MvS's Top 10 Tips:
Try to fix any broken links, such as the ones on the comic page.
Try to minimize scrolling on the pages, exspacially ther home page.
Maybe cut down on some unnessesary content.
Also, perharps you could remove un-related content like the site making guide?
Very good job with the information, keep up with that.
Also, nice job with things like the forum, perhaps you should advertise your site more so more people are active?
Maybe you could remove some images to cut down on clutter?
Awesome job with the RPG, but add some more stuff to do.
Waffles
Over all, amazing site. Try to let people see just how good it really is and keep up the good work!
You get the: Imformation Award The best written site yet!
Pokemon ZRPG- Organization of Extraordinary Heroes: This site features a story of various characters in the media. It is a fun read and worth checking out! Here are MvS's Top 10 Tips:
Maybe give a bit of an introduction to each character before they appear.
Add character bios to the site, that way those who don't know who certain characters are can find out!
Add more content to the site (make sure it applies to your theme!).
Your sidebar goes into your pages, try to fix that.
Make Spyro the original Spyro (not the Legend one). He's cooler (Haha, you don't have to though)!
Try to update the Game News more.
Try to make the News more descriptive.
Perhaps change the tagline to something about the site?
Try to make sure the pages don't scroll out,
Waffles.
Nice job with the site! Keep it up!
You get the Story Award Best Fanfic on the Face of Webs!
Jakeoz- iJakeoz.com: This site features a webs show, and various other things to do and watch. It has a lot of variety, just like the World Wide Web itself! Here are MvS's Top 10 Tips:
For the webshow, I recommend buying a computer microphone and recording your voice using Audacity or something. Maybe even record computer voices (all you need is Audacity for that). As it is, the web show can't keep peoples attention, it needs voices and more sound.
I recommend changing the name of the site. iJakeoz.com isn't your domain, so don't act like it is, it just confuses people. Get a co.nr or .tk domain and call if iJakeoz.co.nr or iJakeoz.tk.
There are some pages that aren't complete. Finish those ASAP, and check your spelling and grammar on other pages.
I really like the names of the pages, they are so creative and attention grabing! Keep with that and put it throughout your site!
Maybe remove that you've won MariovSonic's webwars. I haven't had one... yet.

Also remove other mis-leading statements.
You definatly need to cut down on your side bar. Remove things like the useless Anniversary Countdown (It's over 300 days away! Add it when it's 30 or 10). Maybe if you don't want to remove certain things, you can combine them (put sharing gizmos in one module, etc...).
Add some colour and images to your site, maybe I'll make you a banner if I'm bored!
Try to cut down on unrealted content. I suppose your site's about the web show, so make content about it.
Perhaps change your tag line? As it is now, it'll attarct non-active members who just take up your bandwidth. Maybe call it "The Greatest Show on Earth! (and beyond!)" or something about your web show?
Waffles.
Anyway, keep up the good work! Can't wait to see the site in its prime!
You get the Web Award! Everything on the Web, All in One Place!
Jimbster- KidsWorld.com: This site takes everything Webs sites have to offer and meshes it all in one place. There is plenty to do, and is orginized nicely. Here are MvS's Top 10 Tips:
Maybe change the name. Calling it KidsWorld.com when that isn't the URL can confuse people. Maube call it KidsWorld.tk (TK can stand for Totally Kool).
Try to cut down on the scrolling on pages (don't have pages scroll out).
Check around your site for broken images and flashes.
The comics are good, just work on image quality.
I recomend removing the Anniversary countdown, since it's over half a year away, there is absolutly no point to it and all it does is slow the page down.
Try to have more original content. You can get nearly everything on your site on another site, think about it and come up with something amazing!
Check your grammar and spelling.
Cut down on unrelated content.
Try to minimize use of moving images and images in general. They take forever to load!
Waffles.
Anyway, nice job with the site! Keep on working on it!
You get the Mesh Award! The Best of Webs in One!
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